Liam’s Gold Award Essay: My Week On Planet Junior

Back in June, motivated by his desire to see his grandmother, Liam entered his first international essay competition that is Queen’s Commonwealth Essay Competition 2023, which offered the grand prize of a trip to London.

The topic he chose under the Junior Category: You have been stranded on a planet where everyone is 18 or under. Journal your experience.

He spent about 2 weeks crafting his essay; writing blocks of text everyday, organising and arranging them in a coherent manner. On the day of submission, he was so excited and hopeful.

Truth be told, I didn’t think he was going to win anything. We’re talking about competing with easily over 20,000 entries from all around the word. He asked me almost every other day if I had heard from the organiser and finally, almost 4 months later, I received a plain email stating that Liam had won the Gold Award.

I honestly thought it’s a fancy name for their certificate of participation, but a little more digging later revealed that it wasn’t a mere certificate that everybody got. It’s well and truly a Gold Award to recognise his excellence in writing. Sure, he didn’t win the trip to London but we are still super proud of him!

I printed out his certificate and laminated it and it’s now proudly displayed in our home.

Here’s his winning essay:

My Week On Planet Junior


My name is Liam and I am a billionaire scientist. Getting ready to blast off into space onto a planet that is exactly like Earth. Its name is Planet Junior. According to research, everybody on this planet is 18 or under so, I got to go to the planet because I want to do some research on the planet.

Day 2

So, I am on Planet Junior and my rocket…. well, it crash-landed and has unfixable damage so I cannot fly back to Earth, but I found a city! Everybody was very, very young?! And also, the air smelt mucky and dirty when I first landed on the planet but as I got closer to the city the air got fresher and fresher. When I got to the city, the air was as fresh as the Earth’s air now. I have got to get some rest see you tomorrow.


Now about the food. So, I was so hungry that I went straight into the first restaurant I saw and there was the fresh smell of meat and vegetables. I took a seat and a waiter (who looks 12 years old) came to my table and passed me a tablet. It was the menu and I ordered the cheesy pizza and a meaty burger (with extra meat) and did I order a burger or a piece of rotten meat slapped between some maggoty bread???!!! Did I order a pizza or a piece of bread with some stilton cheese on it???!!! So, I gave the restaurant a one-star rating and left. I was having a stroll when someone said, “You look very old!”. And then I continued walking when I saw somebody that looks 16 years old pushing a baby stroller down the pavement. I asked, “Where is the baby’s mom?” and the girl replied, “I am the mom you idiot!!!!”.


Welcome to day 4 on Planet Junior. I have seen about 18 car crashes since day 1 because here, if you asked for a driver’s licence you will probably get one but you DON’T NEED TO GO THROUGH THE TEST! There is one catch, it costs a lot, like a lot, like £900 pounds a lot yeah. It costs £900 pounds!! But a car is very cheap. Let’s say a Lamborghini costs £100 pounds, a Mercedes costs £97 pounds, but a car like a Honda costs £20 pounds and a Proton (a Malaysian car) costs £10 pounds. I am feeling sleepy now, I’m going to bed. See you tomorrow.


Now I am going to tell you the backstory of this planet. Apparently about a 100 years ago an asteroid hit this planet and everyone over the age of 18 died instantly due to some weird chemical reactions. Unfortunately, the weird chemicals still get passed down into their new bloodlines, so everybody dies when they reach the age of 18. Hence, everyone from this planet is now 18 years old or younger (except me, of course). 

Why do they use English pound for money? They use it because some random astronaut dude showed up and was all like ta-da-da, the English pound! And then he idiotically dumped like £12309909098909 pounds onto the planet.

And why is the food horrid? Because the chefs are young of course.


I have been trying to build spaceship parts and putting them together. I might get a spaceship or some stupid junk, who knows? I shall name my ship the Astro18 and then hopefully, I could fly back to Earth and live happily ever after. Or, I would die in the impact of landing or my spaceship could burn up in the atmosphere. I don’t know what else could happen but I’m probably going to die but only probably, it’s not like I’m definitely going to die… like on a scale of 1 to 100, I would say 50?

I’m hungry so I went to a restaurant named ‘Big Yums and No Yucks’. This restaurant has more experienced chefs. I ordered the ‘Super Monsterzilla Burger’, ‘Cheezy Pizza’ and ‘Motherclucker Nuggets’ that are filled with cheese. They were delish!!


At long last, I have finished the Astro18 and I am ready to fly back to Earth. So, farewell Planet Junior and farewell space, and hello Earth. Home sweet home. I am on my spaceship and earth is in sight. Goodbye.

15 thoughts on “Liam’s Gold Award Essay: My Week On Planet Junior”

  1. Dear Liam,

    To the young wordsmith who penned an incredible story and emerged victorious with a well-deserved award, you are truly brilliant! Your creativity and talent shine brightly! Keep nurturing your gift and letting your imagination run wild, for you have a boundless world of stories to share with the world and ya!

    Congratulations on your well-earned recognition, and may this be just the beginning of your remarkable literary journey, young man!

  2. Your story is so original! Good literacy skills too. I can imagine the whole story as I read. The flow is good! Keep writing stories Liam! You have a flair for it!

  3. Dear Liam,

    I was once around your age and I also took part in commonwealth essay-writing competitions. I can imagine your excitement, nervousness, and every feeling in between throughout the journey. May you continue to have a vivid imagination and an enthusiasm for the written word!

    1. Love the storyline and how well this is written. I felt like I am on the adventure with him. Kudos, Liam! 👏🏼👏🏼 May you continue to write your stories in years to come.

  4. It is fun to read. Thanks Liam for writing this and Kimberly to share it out. I definitely love it. I will share this story with my kids and laugh together. Good job Liam.

  5. Awesome story, Liam! 10/10 I would buy it if it were made into a storybook; I can imagine the hilarious illustrations already! Jared also gave it a read and said it was excellent – funny and creative. Congrats on your award!

  6. Wow, congrats! What a creative & fun story, Liam! I especially loved the “Big Yums no Yucks” restaurant! Made me hungry just thinking about the Monsterzilla burger & Motherclucker nuggets 😋 Keep writing! Looking forward to more amazing stories from you ⭐️❤️

  7. Really funny and entertaining read. Good work, Liam. Hopefully we will get to read many more stories from him. 👍🏼💐

  8. What an enjoyable and entertaining read! I thought I had to make up some words of encouragement but looks like I dont have to: this is a brilliant essay!

  9. Haha!! I love it! Didn’t know the other planet has rating system for food! Keep on writing Liam! You bring so much joy and I enjoy reading it very much!

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